Wombart's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Soul Not Found]

Looks really good for a game jam prototype !

MartinTale responds:

Thank you! ;)

[Man N gun]

The game doesn't seem to load :(

bensonbob responds:

Im sorry, this was the first game I ever made,I don't know how to get rid of it. :(

[Weird Woods]

The controls feel non-intuitive, maybe you could add the jump on the up arrow.
The platforms box collider are too small I think, you could try to make them bigger.
If you dash into a platform, you get stuck.

Hope to see your full game :D

aathishbaws responds:

Thank you for your critique!
I used z to jump because you will be using the direction arrows to control the direction of your dash, which can also be up!

When testing, I had bigger platforms but found that to be too easy and you could play basically forever.

Dashing into a platform from the side was something that happened all the time at one point, I managed to do a partial fix so it happens much less. Still investigating a full fix, I'm trying to learn more about Unity's physics to understand what's going wrong.

[Fred's game remastered]

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[Monster Catcher]

The gameplay is too simple and get boring really fast.
Everything look boring and slow, the music, the art and the gameplay.

[Slight Setback]

Look like a good game but I don't understand how to play it.

I don't understand how you link a bomb to a detonator and the tutorial seems to bug when you start it a second time, I get the first message forever.

Maybe you could add the tutorial in the description.

I find the text hard to read, I think the text size is too big.

Hope it helps.

Poishiche responds:

Thanks for telling me ! I'll be working on the tutorial !
When you buy a bomb then drag it on the floor a fuse appears (grey line).
You need to drag the fuse to a detonator (the box with brown T on it).
You should hear a little sound effect and the fuse should turn green.
I'll add all the informations in the description.